Tuesday, September 15, 2015

Mete cognitive Reflection

Hannah Cooper
Personal Journalism 339 –W 9:00am
Summer Quarter 2015

Personal Journalism has taught me many new ways of thinking about writing in a lot of ways. This course has shaped my perspective on writing by increasing my skills in creative writing and more formal, as well as learning from other students through our class blog posts and concepts from our class.
One component of this personal journalism course I especially enjoyed was the process of writing in our journals itself. I generally like to write but don’t always make the time for it unless there is a deadline. However, this course gave me the desire to make time because for one, there was freedom with guidelines. In other words some written content was only read by a small audience which was less pressure. Second, I felt I could write down even small details that stood out to me without having a specific format, as far as the personal journal goes. The concepts from class and readings provoked a lot of thought.
One concept that stood out to that we discussed in class was identifying patterns in our writing. Some of the patterns that I noticed in my own writing in this time frame was, I used words that associated a feeling (genuine, love, relax) are some of the words. I went to the beach or other nature spots to write, that’s where I found most inspiration. However, sometimes it was hard to begin writing sometimes. I swear, I would think of something I wanted to write down at the most random times and then when I sat down, I would draw a blank. One of the tips you talked about in class Z, was to just set a time for yourself to write, and don’t stop until that time is up. I found this helpful because I didn’t feel so much pressure to write a master piece in the first two lines ‘haha.’ I usually didn’t write straight 30 minutes, but I’d spend a time frame of about two or whatever hours and take breaks in between writing sessions. The first five minutes of the writing sessions, I practiced the first order thinking qualities and thoughts that I would jot down. These thoughts would be random and sometimes the spelling would be incorrect or super just--- out there. Then I would be ‘warmed up’ and actually write with more a purpose in mind or theme.
At times I would write multiple pages with different topics, and other times just a page or rant.  I found it impossible to write in my own house, expect on the patio. The personal journal is easily transported and accessible anywhere, which worked well for me. I could leave my house and still have the opportunity to write and escape. A personal journal is my own. Someone could read the journal, but they can’t change those words on the paper. That fact is sort of scary, but at the same time liberating. On a computer for example, content and text can be deleted by a quick button.
The journal provoked questions I thought of. For instances if I looked back at a week old journal entry I would ask myself why did I feel that way? Was it the feeling temporary? What did I focus on? Why?
A process means there are steps and growth along the way, the journal helped me in the writing process through routine and practice of the art of writing itself. Each week it was interesting to identify patterns or ‘unpatterns.’ Either way, I discovered there are reasons for mostly everything and its’ important to ask questions like why?
 Writing things down helped with my memory and paying more attention to specific small details that I may not have kept note in my mind. When I went back and read my journal entries when organizing my final journal project, it brought me back to the moment when I was writing and the feelings I had at that time. It was a way to reflect and see if there was any progression made, or if the feeling I had then was temporary or still lingering.
Creating and maintaining the blog was super cool too-----!!!. It definitely peaks my interest—style---blog---writing---I eventually want to add more to my blog and start another one. It got me more comfortable formatting blog posts, and familiar with that writing style.
As far as the blog responses go, it was a little more difficult to get in that habit, but it is super important to engage with your audience for a couple of reasons. One, is I love getting read back on what people liked/disliked because it helped coordinate my next blog post. If the audience responds more to one blog post than another, I would take that into consideration and able to adjust and be more cognitive of the content I’m writing about.
Communication as we have learned is a two-way process, meaning it is extremely important to read feedback from who ever are reading and respond to them. I find it very helpful when people reply back because it lets me know there is someone ‘behind the computer,’ which makes it feel more personal.  The feedback provokes thought and allows me to go back and reflect like I mentioned earlier. Someone may respond to a post I made and ask a question that I had not thought of prior which helps me really dip deep as to the message I was trying to convey and if that message got understood.
One of the assignments from class where we had to analysis another person’s journal opened up my perspective on the process of writing. For one, I was looking for an article to write about which is part the beginning process, and I personally find articles I wasn’t planning on coming across but really spoke to me! It was neat to read other people’s personal thoughts because it made we realize we are all a little crazy.
Art and Distance section was interesting also because after I felt freer to write the content not so essay-like with more hidden meanings. I think I meant home after the art analysis class and wrote and poem and was like, “Oh yeah that’s art.” Haha. Like an art piece, a piece of writing can have many meanings and symbols. I find that particularly interesting about both (art and writing pieces).
I am definitely going to continue keeping a handwritten journal. Its’ helped me in a lot of ways especially with being more aware to detail. Writing down my thoughts is like therapy, I always feel better and more accomplished after. I have found that most feelings or emotions are temporary in terms of a reaction towards a situation. For example, one bad day at work doesn’t mean the next day will have the same outcome. In fact it has a greater chance of being better because I was able to acknowledge the feeling by writing it down and then figuring out a solution to make the next time a better experience! Of course not all of my journal entries were rants; many were writing down the little things that made me feel good like a new recipe I want to try or documenting moments that stood out to me.
To sum it all up, I want to highlight a few--- for me was our class discussions and blog posts, the art analysis, the journal project, listening to music during class during our free writes, and readings from the book Project Happiness, which all provided me with a desire well to, ‘never to stop thinking about thinking and writing.’
Sincerely,
Hannah Cooper



Sunday, September 13, 2015

Journal Project

Hey you all!
I really enjoyed seeing your final journal projects, we sure have a creative bunch of people J!
Through journaling this quarter I have been able to reflect on past days, make plans for the future, and just write all the silly thoughts that come around…
I wanted to share my short story I wrote, along with a few of my journal entries and summer playlist. The short story does have a total of two curse words, but it’s done tastefully and with humor. The story has a twist and again uses satire along with real experiences. I hope you enjoy and again it is somewhat personal and would only share with a cool, chill crew aka YOU GUYS!  I am submitting this before work and plan on adding more later today/tomorrow just an FYI. Also this post doesn't contain every journal entry either but maybe we can get together (anyone is class) and swap projects so we can see them up and personal!


                                                   There is this girl. I have gotten to know her. I’ve watched her.
                                                                       She likes bright things, like flowers.
                    Although this one time she bought a bouquet of fake black roses and put them in her room.
                                                                                She loves sarcasm
                                                                      Some humans don’t get hers.
                                                                                     That’s okay
                                                         Some may think she is well, an asshole at times
                                           That’s because she’s pretty direct with how she is feeling
                                                               But then sometimes she isn’t
                                                              So it may be confusing to some
                                         She cares though about people, and wants them to be okay

Sometimes she just roams around the house looking for things.
I’m not even convinced she even knows what she is looking for
But she always has a plan
And a lot of goals
Her sleep schedule is fucked up too
                                                          Maybe it’s because she’s always thinking
                                                          Or maybe it’s because she cuts limes and
Pours drinks for drunks and works late hours for a living for now
At least that’s how she jokes
She can take a joke also and loves to laugh
She prefers to be around people who can make her laugh
And she’ll do her best to do the make sure you are laughing
She likes to surprise people with interesting things
She can be perceived sometimes as being distant
But it’s because she is observing her surroundings.
                                                     
Soft things make her happy, that’s why we get along so well
She loves to converse about new ideas
But she doesn’t share with everyone
Maybe because she has some fears
Also she has been writing in these journals too
Actually she has a few different journals
And books and clothes all over her room
                                                          Yet she still seems organized. Somehow
                                           She describes this ‘bullshit’ and doesn’t seem to care of it much
                                                                     She’s like an optimistic cynic
                         But it doesn’t mean she isn’t sensitive. She’s actually pretty sensitive in a lot of ways.
                                                                She’ll hold me for hours if I let her.                                            
                                                    She wants to listen. Not to respond, but to hear.
                                                                  At least that’s what I think.
                                                         She worries about the future sometimes.
                                      But also likes the most simple of moments, she gives me love
                                       Sincerely,
                                                    Her furry dog bestfriend, MJ



Summer 2015 Quarter Playlist
1. Talking Body- Tove Lo (Gryffin Remix)
2. American Pie- Don McLean
3. Tiny Dancer- Elton John
4. Hold my Hand- The Beatles
5. Someone to Lean On- Major Lazers
6. You and Me- Flume

7.  I mean it- G-Eazy aka Gerald Gillum 


Wednesday, August 26, 2015


Jobs Should Get a Pat on the Back.

Jobs. We all have them or have had them at one time or another. A job provides experience in both that field and other areas. It builds confidence, improves communication skills, self-control not to punch people in the face because you would have a lawsuit against you, and interacting with co-workers is just part of the job description whether you like it or not. A job gives purpose, and oh yeah, it requires money well to, survive. Some jobs can be argued to be better than others, obviously. On the bright side, there is always an upside to perceive things and positives to every job. I am going to throw it back and recap a blurb from one of our readings in, The Pleasures and Sorrows of Work, that got my mind thinking…  

This a quote stood out to me which stated, “There are few jobs that in which years worth of labour that can be scanned in a quick scan of four walls and fewer opportunities granted to us to gather all our intelligence and sensitivity in a single place” (pg.182). From the context behind this passage, there are a few important pieces of advice that I interpreted relating to work, which is one can work his heart away at a job and can quickly be replaced for an unfair reason---(few jobs that in which years worth of labour that can be scanned in a quick scan of four walls) The second part could be interpreted to appreciate the moment in work specifically. I’m not saying to be scared that you will be treated unfairly at all, but look at improving your skill at something while you are there in that moment.  

Another way to view work, and how I interoperated that quote was just appreciate. The benefits that stem from a job could include new relationships (work friend colleagues) also known as the wing-man/woman. These people can be a huge support and ‘shoot’ you’re with them for enough hours, so why not have some fun with your wing-coworkers.    

I enjoy learning where ever I am. If I am at work I try to pay attention to details, be aware in general, be present, and again learn what I can whether that is learning from another employee or a boss.  DeBotton explains the benefits that stem from work in, The Pleasures and Sorrows of Work. It influenced me to make a goal to focus on the upsides of having a ‘money flow’ to buy electricity, and take the opportunity to learn in any situation I am in.

Monday, August 17, 2015

--Journal Project Proposal(s)


What makes me happy?

Sun

Music

Ocean

Family

Quiet

Friends

My dog

Flowers

Sports

Art

People laughing

Spiritual enlightenment

Dancing with no rhythm

Journal Project Proposals
A personal journal to me is filled with treasures of the soul, heart, and mind. Some treasures are meant to be shared with others, and some are not. In this personal journal assignment, I want to share some of my inner thoughts with you.

In our last class meeting, gratitude was the main focus. Writing down on paper what I am thankful for and who I am thankful for really did make me feel well, happier. Sometimes I get caught up in the daily trials of life (which could be a lot worse) and forgot to stop and just say THANK YOU for being alive! Life is a beautiful mess that is far from perfect, but somehow the imperfections make life that much more perfect.

Idea 1: In my personal journal project I want to use song lyrics that I feel correlate with some of my journal entries because it’s one of things that makes me happy. I have been keeping my ears open for songs that have specific meaning to me; you know the ones that give you the chills when you listen to them. For me, a song can promote many different emotions through either the lyrics or the sound or both. I also realized certain songs that gave me chills at a prior time in my life, may not anymore. I suppose that is because we are always changing.

According to The Happiness Project, gratitude connects you to the natural world. I couldn’t agree more! For one, there is the perception out there that money will make you happy. Well, that’s a bunch of Oscar Myers Bologna. One piece of evidence that can back that up is the fact that there wasn’t always paper money in the world, yet people were still capable of being happy.

So, I am ending this post by saying I am going to include music in my personal journal project, but still searching for which songs and how to put it together. I am open for suggestions.

P.S. Feel free to comment with a song that speaks to you in some way I would love to take a listen! ;)

Idea 2:
I was thinking of reviewing my journal entries and seeing if I can spot any common themes or patterns. For example, highlighting words that appear more than once, or a common idea. Then use the common word(s) or theme, and make it into a rap lol.  I would use the common word I found or theme and make that into the chorus, and the other part of the song would still be lines from my journals, but more as the background. I'm far from a rapper bahaha...although I did just see Straight Outta Compton the movie and highly recommend it!

Idea 3:
I think this is the idea I am going with which is to write a short story. I am going to throw a few unexpected 'curve balls' in the story. The story is from a different perspective than my own. You will find out at the end of the story. Anyways, I am creating a book with the short story, printed pictures of my journal entries which go with the short story, include images, a poem, and a song playlist or correlating to the entries and concepts from class. I want to get it laminated so I can look back and be able to reflect on this time period taking this class, the different experiences, and just the random ass thoughts that came out in my journal.




-Coop

Tuesday, August 4, 2015

“Putting Ethnographic Writing in Context.”

Practicing ethnography can help improve the writing process. It requires collecting data, analyzing it, synthesizing, and reflection or a conclusion. According to our article, ethnography highlights human relationships, such as the relationships between a researcher and participates or a teacher and student. The article points out that in learning ethnography writing, there isn’t one set formula The article further discusses how there isn’t one set formula because ethnography is writing requires experimentation, personal voice, style, structure, and a purpose, which can vary depending on who is writing, who the audience is, and the relationship between the sender and receiver (pg 176).

In order to write with a stance there needs to be knowledge and understanding of that particular culture one is writing about or to. This includes knowledge of the values, habits, relationship dynamics, norms, and rituals of that particular culture. As we’ve learned, not everyone is the same, so sometimes generalizing can occur when making a claim about a particular culture that may exclude certain members of that group.   

One important aspect that stood out to me was an important part of ethnography writing is acknowledging the fact that it can affect the lives of those described in that writing piece. One cliché example I can think of is the reality television show, Jersey Shore, a popular show that portrayed Italian Americans living in the Jersey Shore. The show only took a very small population of six Italian Americans, who were loud, obnoxious; by the opinions of most, tan, liked to party, and identified themselves as ‘guidos.’ After the show was aired and gained popularity, there was an uproar response by many Italians in America because they believed the show displayed a false sense of their culture and the people in it. I come from an Italian family, and as I can say yes we are loud, we have far set values of the members on the show Jersey Shore. On a few different occasions 

I ran into some people shortly after the show aired that were from Jersey Shore. Instead of saying where they were from proudly, they felt they had to explain that their culture is nothing like the show and felt they were misrepresented. They almost seemed embarrassed from my observation. This is a shame because obviously MTV did not care or take into consideration that producing this show had the potential to affect other members of the Italian culture in a negative way.  


Understanding different dynamics of other cultures can be done by practicing ethnographic writing as well as improve one’s writing. Research, spending enough time in that culture interacting, learning their values, habits, and asking questions are all techniques used in ethnographic writing, which allows a writer to have a valid stance when writing. 

Tuesday, July 28, 2015

Some perspective...dangit---Psychical Distance

 ‘Psychical Distance’
My thoughts, reaction, and connections

Temporal distance= according to our reading, “Psychical Distance,” is the metaphorical meaning represented by that art piece, which often leads to misconception. Why? We’re about to dig a little deeper as to why there are many misconception in both art and in life!
To summarize the illustration of experiencing ‘fog’ at sea as humans, there are two possibly feelings of emotion or perspectives we can have. The article describes the first reaction to the fog as fear, anxiety, and nervousness. The second feeling is joy, where the body and senses take in every unknown dynamic of the fog’s outcome and the possibilities. I thought this was a unique way to describe “Psychical distance” in how people interpret or see art. The lesson that I took from the illustration is that one painting can have multiple meanings partly due to how people perceive the meaning of the painting. Maybe the artist does this on purpose, or maybe it’s just in our own head. Is the main theme of this illustration that no perspective is more correct than the other?
                The fog illustration in “Psychical Distance,” is similar to the activity we did last class in terms of multiple perspectives being demonstrated from the same setting and time of observation. Our group had four members and although we were at the coffee shop at the same time, we are reported our observation a little differently from one another. One of the members in our group reported more about the noises they heard, while I reported more observation of facial expressions and body. This brings me to a question---why do we choose to focus our attention on certain dynamics of our surrounding? I don’t really know the answer to that question.
The article goes on to say that putting one’s own initial thought aside about what the meaning is of a piece of art, and then objectively observe it again. A way to exercise this alternate way of thinking, is you could pretend to be someone else---someone opposite of you. What would they see? How do you think they would perceive that art piece? The funny thing about this exercise is, no one ever really knows what another person is thinking or feeling, but can collect evidence to support it and make a conclusion. The conclusion can most definitely be wrong though! But it could also be right…
The United States is known as an individualistic society and culture--- I think sometimes seeing alternate perspectives from our own doesn’t come as natural as we like to admit. Why do I say this?  I am linking back to the word individualistic. An example which demonstrates this mentality is in the United States generally one is more likely to get praise and accolades by a personal accomplishment then one who’s standard of accomplishment is defined by bettering the whole (the meaning of what accomplishment looks like can vary between different cultures, society’s norms, and other factors).

The main point that I took away from this article it is impossible to know what exactly someone else is feeling, thinking, ect. Acknowledging that there are multiple perspectives that can stem from one scene, interaction, or observation is important in becoming a mindful and aware person.

Wednesday, July 22, 2015


Hannah Cooper
Journal Entry Analysis: Compare and Contrast
JD Meier, De Vinci, Jason Myer
Journal One: Lessons Learned from John Wooden, by JD Meier
A person that I admired at an early age and currently still admire is, John Wooden. John Wooden was one of greatest basketball college coaches of all time, leading UCLA’S basketball team to ten National Collegiate Athletic Association championship titles, and the record for most games won in a row (88). His legacy is far greater then breaking basketball records, for John was and is well-known for being an extremely positive role model and monitor to his players.
JD Meire, a best-selling author and fan of John Wooden, expresses his great admiration for the UCLA legendary basketball coach in a tribute journal article, Lessons Learned from John Wooden, describing how Wooden greatly impacted many areas of his own life. JD uses personal experience, direct quotes from Wooden, and makes a specific list of 25 examples of Wooden’s spoken values that stood out to him personally.
This informative journal provides insight on the feelings, respect, and admiration JD has for Wooden. He starts off the journal by using a direct quote from Wooden that reads, (“Peace of mind attained only through self-satisfaction in knowing you made the effort to do the best of which you’re capable.” – John Wooden). This writing technique quoting Wooden gives an instant idea of Wooden’s character, and provided the reader a better understanding of Wooden’s values. JD doesn’t write much about Wooden’s accomplishments as UCLA’S coach (although he acknowledges them), but further digs deeper into the life values he implicated to his players, which is noticeable in the second paragraph of the article. JD’s shares his personal experience when listening to Wooden for the first time in an interview. JD said that what stuck with him most about that first time he heard Wooden, was the “simple rules he lived by that helped him make meaning and find happiness.” I interpreted JD using this example in the beginning of his journal article as a way to set the tone and theme of the rest of the article. The tone showed appreciation and gratitude for Wooden having a positive impact on not only him, but many, many others.
JD lists the top twenty-five lessons that he took away from Wooden, which can be a writing convention. This can be a writing convention because it enhances the readability and highlights the main point, which is acknowledging the values Wooden imparted to JD.
Website to access article: http://sourcesofinsight.com/lessons-learned-from-john-wooden/
Journal 2: Hymn, by Jason Myers
Jason Myers uses a variety of writing techniques to portray a specific theme, writing conventions, and specific language in his poem Hymn.  
This particular writing piece falls under one genre of a poem. However there are many ways that a poem can be structured depending on what the purpose of the author is. He does not use a rhyming scheme in this. Instead he uses figurative langue to convey his message or theme. An example of the use of his figurative langue from a line in his poem goes, “just to slip the tongue around those two syllables, silk gloves tailored to contain exactly what they need & nothing.”  The genre of his poem can also fall under spirituality due to his reference of God.  I counted the poem being broken up into seven segmenting paragraphs. Using this techniques his main idea or concept is highlighted making is stand out to the reader. Another writing convention he also uses is dash marks at the end of some of his sentence in his punctuation, which allows the reader to reflect on what was just written. I feel this line in his poem depicts the theme, which is actions he felt he should have been doing or participating is as an early twenty year old. The line is, “singeing cry over the gulf between the soul & what the soul longs for.”
Journals by: De Vinci
Leonardo De Vinci wrote in a very unconventional style. Written text is read is mostly read from left to right, however De Vinci wrote most of his journals from right to left.  No one truly knows his reasoning behind the way he structured his writing this way, but there are theories as to why.  I have a theory of my own. De Vinci is known for his complex mind, brilliant ideas, inventions, and hidden meanings beyond the literal meaning of a word or phrase. The concepts he wrote about, I would argue were far beyond comprehension to most minds in his time. I say this because after reading a few of De Vinci’s journal entries and modern translations, its clear there is still confusion with some of his transcripts meanings. My theory behind his reasoning of writing right to left is that he sees the world and society backwards. He saw the structure of society and its norms, and observed how human behavior conformed to those norms--- however he didn’t want to conform. In other words, he wasn’t following any one culture, but creating new ones in which no one had thought of. Generally, and in the journal entries I read the genre of his writing was characteristics art, theories on psychology, new insight on astronomy, and science. It was difficult to find an original journal entry from De Vinci that is legible to read, so I read some of the translations by other authors, as well as looked at the original to compare. Many of De Vinci’s original pieces are manic, or in other words unorganized. However it isn’t about the organization, but more about the content he is coveying.



Monday, July 20, 2015

A pen. Paper. And the ocean

You. Your thoughts. A pen. And paper. No one else in that moment when writing either a first draft of an essay or a personal journal entry, an can say that it’s wrong. The purpose of a first draft is to get all of your thoughts written out and realizing the first time around, it will not be perfect. To me, that is very liberating because I think most can agree perfection is difficult to accomplish the first time. Everything takes practice.
                In the first chapter of Writing Down the Bones, Goldberg describes how her writing has developed over the years. This helped me reflect of my own prior thoughts and experiences with writing.  She described how in her early years in grade school when writing, she never missed a comma, always double checking to make sure the format is just right. I would argue that most people, including myself, agree these techniques of writing aren’t wrong---However, Goldberg made these qualities sound as a limiting way to write. For one, it didn’t allow freedom in her writing because she was too concerned with grammer (which is important) but it kept her from putting her thoughts on to paper. She said that most the compositions she wrote at a young age were dull, boring, and excluded any real feeling she had about the subject. This made me think of many times in my earlier years in school where I was just going through the writing motions. I fulfilled the requirement, but it was far removed from any passion of mine. I am aware that this practice wasn’t all in vein because structure is an important part of conducting a clear message through writing.
However, not until the last couple of years (about when I started Antioch University) I realized that writing is fun. I mean, it isn’t just fun, but it is good for my well-being. Why? I learned that while yes structure helps with clarity and communicating the purpose of writing, first-order-thinking content in writing is also important and valid. First-order-thinking, as we discussed in our first class meeting is summed up as, one’s uncensored thoughts or intuitive thoughts. Second-order-thinking is more about checking one’s self, communicating for a specific reason or purpose, and more analytical. First order of thinking comes more natural and in my opinion is more freeing. It is freeing because it’s literally what comes to your brain in that instant. However, if everyone acted, spoke, or wrote in this practice alone, I have a feeling it would be quite a different world.
Goldberg talks about picking out a specific pen that connects with you and the paper.  At first I couldn’t really relate to connecting with a pen. I can’t recall a time I ever had a lucky pencil. But after digging deeper, I realized that her pen is equivalent to my environment in which I write. She describes how the right pen can create more freedom in her writing because she personally connects with how the pen and paper feel.
 I find that the environment affects the way I write. I feel at most peace with the pen and paper if I am in nature, especially the beach. I know that the details of the ocean are far more complex than anything that I could possibly write. By understanding that there is something so mysterious, unknown, and massive right in front of me, it makes me feel comfortable exploring my most inner thoughts. I’m still not exactly sure why that is, but it is.  



Wednesday, July 15, 2015

Hey everyone! Here's a little info about me...

Is it just me, or is writing a blurb about you a little difficult? I say it is a little difficult because I feel like there are many little subcultures that make me, well, me...
When someone asks me to describe myself as a whole, it makes a little uncomfortable because typically, there’s a lot to know and I don’t know where to begin.
I hate first dates. Does that explain a little? I hate first dates because I despise the so called ‘small talk’ that has to be exchanged between the two parties. I know the small talk is necessary---to get to know one another--- And I do understand that process. However, a lot of the times the ‘good stuff’ or qualities of a person is far beyond the typical small talk questions like, ‘what do you do’ or ‘where did you grow up.’ These questions are yes important in getting to know someone, but am I a weirdo for having the urge to ask questions of more depth or out of the ordinary like, what your first childhood’s bestfriend was and why you were friends on a first date?
Anyway, I am getting a little side tracked here, hence this is not a supposed to be a dating blurb, but one to get to know each other a little better.
 As I have been attending Antioch for a little over a year now, I know some of you already, and look forward to getting to know the rest of you fellow student colleagues in more depth. So to get that process started, here are a few qualities about me. I really enjoy the sounds of the ocean and the feeling of sand between my toes. In life, I feel that we are supposed to go, go, go, but being by the ocean forces me to relax and slow down. Reflect. I have a passion for sports and I love to engage in conversations about it, whether that is a conversation about your experiences as an athlete or just being a fan. Go Kobe!
 I have lived in Santa Barbara for about six years and grew up on the Central Coast most of my life. I have a huge extended family. My mom is one of nine siblings, so our family gatherings can be compared to a circus sometimes. You better believe that the chances of someone crying, yelling, or dancing will be in the mix when we all get together. Although I have different views then a lot of my family members, I can still say they have molded who I am.
 I genially enjoy making people around me feel like they matter, because they do. JO, who is another professor at Antioch said something recently that stuck with me. She said, “you are a culture of one.” In other words, every single person is their own unique culture. I think the previous quote is important to remember because in our society it’s normal to associate one’s self with labels or groups. It is refreshing to know that no one else can be you!
That’s all for now and again I am honored to get to know the rest of you better this quarter. Cheers!
-Coop


Monday, May 11, 2015


Develop an argument for writing: research paper----Thesis statement brainstorm.

·         Writing fits many genres

·         There is no one particular style of format for writing, because that would mean there is only one audience.

·         There is not one correct formant in writing because there are many different genres of an audience.

·         There is always an alternate view, genre, symbol that can be found in a writing piece.

·         Every piece of writing has a purpose

Sunday, May 10, 2015

Timely Matter

Time? Who's Got it? Why do You Deserve Your Audience's Time?

During this course, I really gain a lot of insight through reading material from other students and as your student colleague, I greatly respect the opinions and feedback I get from you! I’ve gained different perspectives along the way reading different styles of writing in our class. Anyway, these following points stood out to me from our text and chapters this week which gave me a better understanding of what content to include for the research paper. Let’s swap ideas! I’d like to hear any points that stood out to you as well. Here’s what I found very insightful…

In the article, “So What, Who Cares?” highlights how a writer should answer the question why on earth should their intended audience, excuse my langue, but give “a rat’s tail” what you have to say? People’s time is precious and not to mention time is money! In other words, if someone decides to give you their time to read your article; why? They can accept or deny it, agree with some, or find new information.  
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 One of the points that this article pointed out and I thought was helpful is that all writing is conversational.(pg 92) This really stuck in my mind for a few reasons. One of the reasons is the fact that I’ve heard people in various classrooms and just conversation that correlate persuasive langue only presenting one side. Although this can be true, what is the purpose for writing something or expressing something through your writing? I would say the goal is for people to see some point of view or perspective. The way you do is that is by presenting evidence, and explaining an observation or analysis of your claim. This was another helpful thought in the article was by incorporate what others may think or contrast  before saying your claim, creating positive tension within your writing catches the reader naturally.

Second concept that I want to be aware when writing, even in my research paper is that conversations usually are two-sided. In other words, there is a sender and receiver. To summarize it up, I don’t like to be preached too in an reading a piece of writing without the author saying why I should listen, so I’m sure my audience doesn’t to be preached either (depending on your purpose for writing it of course). I want to be presented evidence, any observations, and I can decide if I want to accept the information. 

Monday, May 4, 2015

Readin' Like A Darn Writer

Does anyone read those articles on Elitedaily or Buzzfeed? These articles usually have a witty, relatively short introduction followed by a numbers list with bold headlines. Each headline then has a paragraph or sentence giving more information on the headline. One example of article’s headline in this particular style read, “8 Bittersweet Things You’ll Learn As You Get Older.” I noticed that these types of articles became really popular over the last year. Maybe it’s because people are tired of the same old boring constructed five paragraph essay-like readings. Or maybe we all have A.D.D. and like to know that we only have to read 8 bullet points. Anyways, I’ve personally found it refreshing!

Here’s 6 ways Mr. Bunns the Author Got Me to Read like a Writer


  •  Pick a piece of writing and reflect about why you feel the way you do towards it. Was it the way the author constructed the paragraphs? Maybe it was the language the author used. Maybe it was informal, which made you feel more comfortable as if a friend was speaking to you.  Bunns said after reflecting as to why you felt that way, now think of how the author’s writing technique and content can be interpreted in a different way


  •   Refelct on your own writing. Of course content reflects who the audience is, but I would say my writing style usually has an informal tone. Again, this is based on my audience.

  •  Every author has a purpose in what they are writing and -----how they convey their message.---- Here’s the twist; he said now imagine the author’s purpose or message is completely different than what you originally thought. For instance, two people can perceive the same piece of writing differently. Writing is like an art form, different audiences see different pictures and symbols in paintings all the time. This can happen in a piece of writing as well. 


  •   Audience is key.Bunns kept highlighting how important it is to identify your audience and what tone you want to convey before you start writing. 


  •  You can’t always control who your audience is, but according to our readings, but we should know our intended audience pretty well to have an effective piece of work. Some articles, essays, passages purpose may be to convey more than one message or symbol. I guess that’s what makes writing adventurous.

  •     Look for patterns the author uses! Does the author use a word over and over throughout his/her piece? Maybe the author uses a word just once, to create emphasize on that word.  Maybe the article sounds more like a conversation through his use of language, tone, and informal style. These techniques are all done by the author on purpose, usually.  

Friday, May 1, 2015

Final Draft Email-Already sent; but would like feed back, feel free to add anything! Thanks ya'll! P.S. Blog4 soon to follow

To, Lindsey

Hello there, my name is Hannah Cooper, a student from Antioch University in the Liberal Arts Program. I am emailing in hopes to set up an in person interview for the purpose of gaining more insight on your career path and how you got started with Magnolia Event Designs.
          
A little about myself, I am interested in starting my own business in designing and branding a clothing line. I have tried and failed at my first business adventure, but I’m not giving up. I am currently taking an Academic Writing course this quarter (creative writing), and our first assignment is to interview a person you find inspiring with similar career goals or have had success in their career. But enough about me, I want to hear more about you. I came across Magnolia Event Designs when searching for event coordinators, and greatly admire what I know so far of your company!

would be honored if you gave me the chance to pick a part your brain about the event coordinating field and what it takes being a business owner. My professor is also asking that we collect ‘artifacts’ pertaining to your business which will also serve as material for my paper. This can include any pamphlets used to advertise, flyers, blogs, or whatever you would like to share. If possible, I would like to set up an interview in the next two weeks I look forward to speaking with you soon!
          

Best regards,

Hannah Cooper
Antioch University Liberal Arts Program

Monday, April 27, 2015

Get Out, and Smell the Roses

Get Out, and Smell the Roses

It’s no secret that Santa Barbara is very pectoris---Whether you are taking in the breathtaking views of the ocean and letting your worries disappear, or cruising up the mountains into the Rivera looking down at the city from a bird’s eye view.
One of the places I find particularly beautiful is the Santa Barbara Mission.  I find it beautiful for a few reasons, but we’ll get into that a little later. Anyway, this week I took a walk to the mission to get some inspiration for one, this blog post, and second, just life in general. (We can never stop seeking inspiration!) Am I right? One of the reasons I find the Mission beautiful and inspiring is it’s landscaping which consists of hundreds of rose bushes in every color you can imagine. You can sniff away for hours!
As I briefly mentioned in the first blog post, I enjoy all kinds of flowers.
On my way to the army of rose bushes at the Santa Barbara Mission, I got inspired along the way to take pictures of the flower gems spring has provided. Despite this horrible drought California is in, the flowers are BLOOMIN’.

Here’s the first flower I ran into on my walk. I named him, “Bad Kisser.” Yes, I named the flowers.




These also caught my attention. Thorns generally have a negative connotation and correlate with pain. To me the pink thorns represented the beauty in past hurdles, which deserve recognition.  



On a lighter note, I named this tree, “Purple Rain.” I feel the name explains it’s self. I continued my walk to the Santa Barbara Mission…

Here is another bunch of dainty ladies I found. I named this squad, “Sex in the City.”


I finally made it to my destination and I got the inspiration I was looking for.



I even got to kick off my sandals and put my toes in the grass. It was a good walk with a little taste of Santa Barbara's gems.



Monday, April 20, 2015

Intro

My first initial thought to our first blog blurb requiring an introduction about ourselves, was why the first blog couldn't be an easy one.  I say this for a few reasons. 
 In order to introduce yourself, you must know somewhat who are you as a person.  Well in my opinion I am made up of many different, “genres” which make me, me and some genres are just too hard to type out.Another reason I feel it is hard to write about myself, is the fact that is does requires reflection on yourself and that at times can be uncomfortable.  
After reflecting a bit, I also came up with another realization. My realization is this. In society we are forced to identify ourselves with certain groups, status quo, titles, job occupation, age, athletic or not, a ‘techy’, education status, ect.  Although I do identify with some of the things on above list such as I am a college student working towards my Liberal Arts Degree, specializing in Communication Studies and Media. I have a huge interest in the marketing world and advertising aspect. I have experience in promotional work and even some entry level sales type work. I played sports for thirteen years of my life, and sports continue to be a passion of mine.
Not that the above description isn’t correct about me, because it is.  Yet, it is missing many of my genres that make me, me. So I went back and did some more reflecting about myself.  This is what I came up with.

Hello, my name is Hannah, I like pretty things, especially flowers. When I walk by a garden or patch of roses I can’t help but stop and take a long whiff.  I am observant to my surroundings and I like to study people interacting with one another. I find it fascinating! The sound of the ocean makes my soul feel alive and if I am away from it too long, I can’t help but feel trapped. I also love collecting seashells and making things. I have loved and I have lost, I have felt complete bliss and complete despair to my own standards; but all make up the genres of Hannah and I wouldn’t change it for a minute.