Develop an argument for writing: research paper----Thesis statement brainstorm.

·         Writing fits many genres

·         There is no one particular style of format for writing, because that would mean there is only one audience.

·         There is not one correct formant in writing because there are many different genres of an audience.

·         There is always an alternate view, genre, symbol that can be found in a writing piece.

·         Every piece of writing has a purpose

Timely Matter

Time? Who's Got it? Why do You Deserve Your Audience's Time?

During this course, I really gain a lot of insight through reading material from other students and as your student colleague, I greatly respect the opinions and feedback I get from you! I’ve gained different perspectives along the way reading different styles of writing in our class. Anyway, these following points stood out to me from our text and chapters this week which gave me a better understanding of what content to include for the research paper. Let’s swap ideas! I’d like to hear any points that stood out to you as well. Here’s what I found very insightful…

In the article, “So What, Who Cares?” highlights how a writer should answer the question why on earth should their intended audience, excuse my langue, but give “a rat’s tail” what you have to say? People’s time is precious and not to mention time is money! In other words, if someone decides to give you their time to read your article; why? They can accept or deny it, agree with some, or find new information.  

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 One of the points that this article pointed out and I thought was helpful is that all writing is conversational.(pg 92) This really stuck in my mind for a few reasons. One of the reasons is the fact that I’ve heard people in various classrooms and just conversation that correlate persuasive langue only presenting one side. Although this can be true, what is the purpose for writing something or expressing something through your writing? I would say the goal is for people to see some point of view or perspective. The way you do is that is by presenting evidence, and explaining an observation or analysis of your claim. This was another helpful thought in the article was by incorporate what others may think or contrast  before saying your claim, creating positive tension within your writing catches the reader naturally.

Second concept that I want to be aware when writing, even in my research paper is that conversations usually are two-sided. In other words, there is a sender and receiver. To summarize it up, I don’t like to be preached too in an reading a piece of writing without the author saying why I should listen, so I’m sure my audience doesn’t to be preached either (depending on your purpose for writing it of course). I want to be presented evidence, any observations, and I can decide if I want to accept the information. 

Readin' Like A Darn Writer

Does anyone read those articles on Elitedaily or Buzzfeed? These articles usually have a witty, relatively short introduction followed by a numbers list with bold headlines. Each headline then has a paragraph or sentence giving more information on the headline. One example of article’s headline in this particular style read, “8 Bittersweet Things You’ll Learn As You Get Older.” I noticed that these types of articles became really popular over the last year. Maybe it’s because people are tired of the same old boring constructed five paragraph essay-like readings. Or maybe we all have A.D.D. and like to know that we only have to read 8 bullet points. Anyways, I’ve personally found it refreshing!

Here’s 6 ways Mr. Bunns the Author Got Me to Read like a Writer

•  Pick a piece of writing and reflect about why you feel the way you do towards it. Was it the way the author constructed the paragraphs? Maybe it was the language the author used. Maybe it was informal, which made you feel more comfortable as if a friend was speaking to you.  Bunns said after reflecting as to why you felt that way, now think of how the author’s writing technique and content can be interpreted in a different way

•   Refelct on your own writing. Of course content reflects who the audience is, but I would say my writing style usually has an informal tone. Again, this is based on my audience.

•  Every author has a purpose in what they are writing and -----how they convey their message.---- Here’s the twist; he said now imagine the author’s purpose or message is completely different than what you originally thought. For instance, two people can perceive the same piece of writing differently. Writing is like an art form, different audiences see different pictures and symbols in paintings all the time. This can happen in a piece of writing as well. 

•   Audience is key.Bunns kept highlighting how important it is to identify your audience and what tone you want to convey before you start writing. 

•  You can’t always control who your audience is, but according to our readings, but we should know our intended audience pretty well to have an effective piece of work. Some articles, essays, passages purpose may be to convey more than one message or symbol. I guess that’s what makes writing adventurous.

•     Look for patterns the author uses! Does the author use a word over and over throughout his/her piece? Maybe the author uses a word just once, to create emphasize on that word.  Maybe the article sounds more like a conversation through his use of language, tone, and informal style. These techniques are all done by the author on purpose, usually.  

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To, Lindsey

Hello there, my name is Hannah Cooper, a student from Antioch University in the Liberal Arts Program. I am emailing in hopes to set up an in person interview for the purpose of gaining more insight on your career path and how you got started with Magnolia Event Designs.

          

A little about myself, I am interested in starting my own business in designing and branding a clothing line. I have tried and failed at my first business adventure, but I’m not giving up. I am currently taking an Academic Writing course this quarter (creative writing), and our first assignment is to interview a person you find inspiring with similar career goals or have had success in their career. But enough about me, I want to hear more about you. I came across Magnolia Event Designs when searching for event coordinators, and greatly admire what I know so far of your company!

I would be honored if you gave me the chance to pick a part your brain about the event coordinating field and what it takes being a business owner. My professor is also asking that we collect ‘artifacts’ pertaining to your business which will also serve as material for my paper. This can include any pamphlets used to advertise, flyers, blogs, or whatever you would like to share. If possible, I would like to set up an interview in the next two weeks I look forward to speaking with you soon!

          

Best regards,

Hannah Cooper

Antioch University Liberal Arts Program

(805) 264-5207

hannahmcooper@yahoo.com