To, Lindsey
Hello there, my name is Hannah Cooper, a student from Antioch University in the Liberal Arts Program. I am emailing in hopes to set up an in person interview for the purpose of gaining more insight on your career path and how you got started with Magnolia Event Designs.
A little about myself, I am interested in starting my own business in designing and branding a clothing line. I have tried and failed at my first business adventure, but I’m not giving up. I am currently taking an Academic Writing course this quarter (creative writing), and our first assignment is to interview a person you find inspiring with similar career goals or have had success in their career. But enough about me, I want to hear more about you. I came across Magnolia Event Designs when searching for event coordinators, and greatly admire what I know so far of your company!
I would be honored if you gave me the chance to pick a part your brain about the event coordinating field and what it takes being a business owner. My professor is also asking that we collect ‘artifacts’ pertaining to your business which will also serve as material for my paper. This can include any pamphlets used to advertise, flyers, blogs, or whatever you would like to share. If possible, I would like to set up an interview in the next two weeks I look forward to speaking with you soon!
Best regards,
Hannah Cooper
Antioch University Liberal Arts Program
Hello, Hanna,
ReplyDeleteI feel you wrote a very persuasive letter. I think you did really well by introducing yourself well, and than informing the recipient about why you wanted the interview.
I think the letter was convincing and persuasive, if i was the reader, i probably feel good about agreeing to get interviewed. Although if i had to find a critique to give, which is hard to find. It would be maybe giving room for the person to decline. So the person will not feel pressured.
Other than that, it was extremely well written.